A Green Foliage.
I was on the road,
It began to shower.
In search of shelter
I made a quick glance around.
by Ravi Panamanna
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30 May 2018 01:28
so gracefully crafted every word well penned 10++++
29 Aug 2017 07:11
I like the chopped short words and lines and the rhythm of this poem. it leads you on to the next line and then the next. Great skill Ravi, well done.
Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer
08 Feb 2017 12:44
Nice enjoying in greeny environment, bird watching.10
26 Dec 2016 08:05
its so nice of you to share this kind of of poem to us, while reading this an image of you to the world of enchanted forest is I have easily imagined... I really like it, it touches me so much.... thanks for sharing.
02 Dec 2016 09:16
I do remember those trees by the roads. Tamarind, Banyan, pepul and Jamun. Cities are encroaching everywhere. Thanks for bringing back those memories.
Edward Kofi Louis
27 Aug 2015 04:07
A sweet aroma with the muse of life. Nice work.
27 Jul 2015 08:51
Truly, sweet memories of nature as such linger in mind throughout our life giving immense pleasure and joy.
27 Jun 2009 05:42
true nature, s man. i envy you ravi.nice write voted10 surya
29 May 2009 09:18
commemorating the past..but it has a great hope, green leaves means life..umbrella is a a roof..this poem is very beautiful.grace.
Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home)
28 May 2009 09:36
sir, the story you told. i saw with crytal clear vision.
25 May 2009 01:12
Excellent composition with feelings.
24 May 2009 07:59
'Nature is to be cherished to be perished only' is the prevailing trend...yet dense foliage of swwet memories can be immortal...nice write
23 May 2009 10:10
such a beautiful poem.............cutting down tress is a crime.................well done
Cindy Kreiner Sera
23 May 2009 08:42
Most enjoyable Ravi, recalling this picture still fresh in your mind gives it a memorable lift at the end- imagery very good - Cindy
22 May 2009 11:44
very visual indeed...you v crafted the poem very well....the kind of auditory and visual images you v used portrays a really beautiful picture in the reader's mind's eye thanks for the invitation 10+++
22 May 2009 12:19
Fabulous write. Fully enjoyed my read. Amazing work with good note.
20 May 2009 05:44
lovely poem and nice way of reminding the world not to spoile the enviornment.
20 May 2009 10:07
ravi very nice poem awareness about the fast degrading environs is the call of the day reminds me of a movie...soilent green from the 70s great lines cheers
19 May 2009 05:49
the celestial canopy of protection..which we all need to preserve well put
Dr Hitesh Sheth
18 May 2009 12:03
I too bathed in a blissful showers of poem.............................A Good Write.........