A Grizzly Dream- Fun

The other night I retired to bed and had a crazy dream
That I was walking on the beach when I heard an awesome scream
Standing right before me was a great brown grizzly bear
wearing a tu-tu and a basque and a ribbon in her hair

by Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson Click to read full poem

Comments (10)

I agree with David and I love this little poem, it's nice to see humour in poems every now and then and not always the serious side or doom and gloom. This is truly and up poem, thanks for sharing Lisa.--Melvina--
Lisa, this is a quirky funny poem. Your humour is as quirky as mine. I loved this. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David
i loved it what more 2 say? ? ? .. one of the best 'funny poems'.. ive read... KEEP WRTING DONT STOP.. bcuz i will be here..2 comment on many of themm so u will see my name many a times: -) debbie: -) *KEEP WRITING*- (a message from kays cuzin)
Lisa, great ending to a hysterical poem... well done! ! Brian
T'was this a dream-or a nightmare-but wait, that horse belongs in another story! Very funny, esp. the picture you paint of Kay, the Dancing Queen!
.. What a delightful way to end a day! I'll be chuckling in my sleep! This poem's ending was a hilarious surprise. Excellent rhythm and rhyme. Very original, too! (10 points for you!) Dee xx ..
OMG that was heaps good. Where do you get this stuff? you are heaps funny.
A grizzly bear wearing a tu-tu? This I've got to see. Good fun...
Yes YES YES! ! ! ! If laughter be our gardens needs then take another of Lisa's reads What fun! Love Duncan X
What fun! Laughter is sometimes the best medicine for all our ills. Warm regards, Sandra