Soul of brevity
deep words of meaning in life
by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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23 Jul 2019 06:22
A haiku for a poet..Excellently penned😊
25 Jul 2018 11:40
:) can you tell what i'm thinking? ?
02 Apr 2018 08:52
i hope my vote is registered. Tried twice
02 Apr 2018 08:51
Haiku beautifully explained in form of a haiku. Just perfect. I vote it 10
14 Feb 2016 10:09
brevity in thought conveying great meanings, . thank you very much for this Haiku. tony
22 Aug 2014 02:07
Beautiful Haiku. Short and Sweet enriched with profound meaning. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.
Patrick A. Martin
09 Nov 2009 04:53
Very nice Haiku the poet taking the reader on the journey with her.10
25 Aug 2009 04:00
A snapshot of a thought caught beautifully Lorraine. Best wishes, Andrew
23 Jul 2009 04:47
The way you use small words to make such bigger and deeper meanings come to life is amazing! +10
30 Jun 2009 12:06
Really words in depth, lovely thanks 10+
23 Jun 2009 11:57
I love Haiku's and this one was stunning. I can't wait to read more of your works.
17 May 2009 07:04
A haiku type of poem... Simple like a quote, but more deeper meaning... I'll write like one of those.. ;) Thumbs UP! ! !
05 Apr 2009 02:38
a quick flash of words so aptly illuminating the very idea of the haiku
Barry A. Lanier
28 Mar 2009 09:49
A wonderful cognitive American haiku...bravo
27 Feb 2009 10:33
Although your syllable count of 5-7-5 is correct, Lorraine, this is technically not a haiku but a senryu poem. A haiku is only about nature, nothing else. A senryu is about anything else except nature. Both are always written in the 5-7-5 syllable style. Still, I enjoyed this well written and expressed senryu poem very much. Carl.
Barry A. Lanier
19 Feb 2009 07:39
Lorraine I enjoyed the provocation of thought in this haiku...eternal vs. the moment.....and which has more meaning in the end......thanks for sharing your talent and insight
Howard The Motivational Poet Simon
02 Feb 2009 09:59
Short but solid and substantive. Thanks for sharing.
16 Dec 2008 08:18
I really love this poem! Like most good Japanese literature, it leaves so much to the reader and is very philosophical. Well done! Please check out my poems, and let me know what you think! Thank you in advance- http: //poemhunter.com/samuel-stuart-pennell/ Samuel Stuart Pennell
02 Dec 2008 03:35
Contains so many aspects of a good haiku. I am still trying to master it. So I read others hoping to translate the secret. I am sure I will find your haiku insipiring.
27 Oct 2008 10:35
in these 3 beautiful lines everything is defined.....a very beautiful haiku..10