A Haiku

Soul of brevity

deep words of meaning in life

by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black Click to read full poem

Comments (26)

:) can you tell what i'm thinking? ?
i hope my vote is registered. Tried twice
Haiku beautifully explained in form of a haiku. Just perfect. I vote it 10
brevity in thought conveying great meanings, . thank you very much for this Haiku. tony
Beautiful Haiku. Short and Sweet enriched with profound meaning. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.
Very nice Haiku the poet taking the reader on the journey with her.10
A snapshot of a thought caught beautifully Lorraine. Best wishes, Andrew
The way you use small words to make such bigger and deeper meanings come to life is amazing! +10
Really words in depth, lovely thanks 10+
I love Haiku's and this one was stunning. I can't wait to read more of your works.
A haiku type of poem... Simple like a quote, but more deeper meaning... I'll write like one of those.. ;) Thumbs UP! ! !
a quick flash of words so aptly illuminating the very idea of the haiku
A wonderful cognitive American haiku...bravo
Although your syllable count of 5-7-5 is correct, Lorraine, this is technically not a haiku but a senryu poem. A haiku is only about nature, nothing else. A senryu is about anything else except nature. Both are always written in the 5-7-5 syllable style. Still, I enjoyed this well written and expressed senryu poem very much. Carl.
Lorraine I enjoyed the provocation of thought in this haiku...eternal vs. the moment.....and which has more meaning in the end......thanks for sharing your talent and insight
Short but solid and substantive. Thanks for sharing.
I really love this poem! Like most good Japanese literature, it leaves so much to the reader and is very philosophical. Well done! Please check out my poems, and let me know what you think! Thank you in advance- http: //poemhunter.com/samuel-stuart-pennell/ Samuel Stuart Pennell
Contains so many aspects of a good haiku. I am still trying to master it. So I read others hoping to translate the secret. I am sure I will find your haiku insipiring.
in these 3 beautiful lines everything is defined.....a very beautiful haiku..10
WONDERFUL hAIKU- SNAP SHOT OF A THOGHT...lovely10