*a Humble Complaint*

You could have been more polite observing me,
Your harsh words have left
An indelible impression,
Hatred can be won by love alone,

by Mohammad Akmal Nazir Click to read full poem

Comments about *a Humble Complaint*

hello 10 Oct 2018 04:30
it is so good but it is so bad
REZA HUNTER LION 29 Sep 2018 08:36
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Ishan Dwivedi 15 Jul 2018 08:07
Poem with a great stuff
Rommel Galicia 22 Jun 2017 08:09
very nice poem indeed👍
Khanyisile Mtshali 21 Nov 2016 04:11
Beautiful use of words. I can relate to what is meant... thank you for sharing.
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 Aug 2016 09:46
Expressive and impressive composition. Thanks.
Seema Chowdhury 17 Sep 2015 05:40
A poignant and an expressive write.
Precia Liz 27 Dec 2014 08:20
nice poem, i liked it...
Akhtar Jawad 26 Jun 2014 06:25
Nice idea, nice poem.
Bothwell T Murindagomo 09 Apr 2014 02:31
Wow, wow. Love the way u have played with simple words but bringing out exactly what the heart is feeling.
Nyagaka Charles 07 Jan 2014 01:22
real life...lovely piece.
Moses Olarotimi 29 Feb 2012 05:30
Nice piece of creative intelligence. I envy u. Kip it coming
Diamond Williams 10 Jan 2012 11:19
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...WELL WRITTEN
Eva Saldana 10 Jan 2012 07:22
Exellent! ! :) i loved it. 10
Dickens Joseph Sawo 08 Jan 2012 06:07
this poem reminds me of a saying in my country where your title means the same, i love its simplicity in words.wonderful poem with wise sentences.
Nadood Al Nasser 17 Nov 2011 01:49
Beautiful and amazing. Well done my friend, u have just created a masterpiece! ! ! !
Marcus Mckinley 17 Oct 2011 12:18
criticism is always hardest to take from someone you love. nicely written
Scarlett Blades 10 Oct 2011 08:38
Wow, very impressive! I love the way you describe things. Lovable! I rate it a perfect 10.: -)
Benjamin Dotse 07 Oct 2011 02:20
Indeed this is a great poem.i dont even how to congratulate you this is a kind of situation which most lovers go through.your poem spoke to all of us who fall a victim to this situation.it not jyst a great poem but an excellent one.THUMBS UP
J Pe 19 Sep 2011 04:29
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