A Journey In Astral Abode

This is the night coach,
The space bus in my dream,
I have slept inside,
This is traveling in space,

by Kumarmani Mahakul Click to read full poem

Comments (10)

This is a wonderful imaginative poem, that takes the reader into a cosmic journey of exploration and extraordinary beauty! It flows and floats with the same ease as the spaceship! Fantastic!
beautifully penned and graceful notions- My space dream bus is travelling, Towards imperishable eternity, Towards imperishable golden abode, Where our father dwells to grace, Towards father of heaven to meet
Still my Journey of life is not Ended! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Your imageries are always awesome...this one is no exception....I like the term Space Bus....congrats and thanks a lot...lovely poem 10++++
This poem has the qualities of a science-fiction poem; it reminded me of '' Passengers '' (2016) , a film I have seen couple of times. Beautifully written and imaginative!
Wow, A dream to cheris and a dream to make it come true.Nicely thought and written....10+++
Kumarmani, such an uplifting poem............................
A wonderful imaginative write superbly penned. A vivid portrayal of God's abode. Beautifully crafted write.10++
powerful energy out there, even in a bus, KM
A poem that takes the reader to a wonderful spiritual peaceful place? Well written Kumarmani