* A Joy

Poem By Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

if it was a share
which gave you joy
how can you use it
as a ploy.

Comments about * A Joy

nice poem :) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Seeing this as haihuetic in lenth and intent, , , disgust with using affection and love delteriously
This seems to be a mini version of 'A Seed Within. ' and that is not good to start with. Even this little verse is not clear to this reader in terms of total meaning. Perhaps, it is a language thing. But whatever it is, it isn't good. GW62
Poem is short & readablem Please go through my poems SHARE and FORGIVE.
Bravo! Fantastic job says so much my friend


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