every word that touches the heart is like a legacy...
by puti ira
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07 Sep 2005 09:48
Interesting write....I had to read it till the end.
28 Mar 2005 03:09
interesting ending - what works with this poem is - it kept me going to the end wanting to know why and what would happen - sign of a good story teller
24 Mar 2005 10:52
Herbert one writes what one feels, I have written many a crime poem over the years because I am am interested in criminology. I liked your poem it flowed well, I love to read a poem where the pen flows to make easy reading and this one did.
Velmar Pewee Hale Johnson
08 Mar 2005 12:17
Aah, a poem to my liking. It sends chills up and down my spine, you're 10 awaits.
09 Jan 2005 12:21
Did you write this from a pure fictional angle or did it realte to an actual happening? ? ?