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A Little Secret Nature
AW (7/09/1940 / Hong Kong)

A Little Secret Nature

Poem By Albert Wong

The morning sun just rises bright after a fresh sawn is just over.
A breeze wind blows gently.
The wild flowers look so weak as just awoken.

The sun, the flowers are starting a new day
after one night sleep.
It is so lovely the flowers are enjoying
the soft breeze winds.
They are absorbing full help from sun and
free air in the morning.

All these lovely nature are refreshing my
eyes so gentle with love.
How the sun shines gently and air sweetly
This is a sudden feeling makes me taste the nature is so great.

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Gives a fresh feeling of a beautiful dawn 9
I gave this a six because while it is very pleasant to hear this beauty talked about, the words and the phrases just don't do so in a beautiful way. To put it more clearly, it just isn't well described. I believe there is a bit of a language problem here. It is meant to sound well, but it just doesn't. GW62


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