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A Lonesome Lover
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A Lonesome Lover

I'm tired
How much I should cry
How much my heart
Should host the bye

That's enough
Enduring the sadness
Fighting for more or less

How can i sell my heart for free
Why should I simply die
With tearful plea

How lonesome you are in this world
Inconstant world, I don’t want anything
No more

Where is the place of lover
Open my eyes
Show me the true love


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Comments (12)

Oh yes, I have been there, I have been the lonesome heart and letter to God where written for only He can bring this love to me, so i believed day and night, cried the tears of sorrow and hoped that tomorrow he will come and I will see him not with my eyes but with my soul and I have received this precious gift when love became my only life for love was the only thing I new, my heart was full of this love so deep, I felt the heat with every beat, I found myself in paradise, heaven it was for God has brought this love to me for my only soul to see. Thank you I wrote this from inspiration of your poem and it is my true story, Thank you! Love and Light!
'Open my eyes Show me the true love' Rachel Ann Butler
'Mystics Scientists Where is the place of lover Open my eyes Show me the true love Uncover' Real observation, wonderfully ended. Every relation is conditional.
'Oh, Lord... how lonesome u r in this world'......... amazing words, touches from the bottom of one`s heart... u know, i think if those words were sent to a girl, they could be sent to our Lord too... coz sometimes i think, how lonely He must be... but the poem is great, ur lucky to be able to make such thoughts. i wish u success dear friend.
what can I say I was feeling soo lonely before I came to this site..but now I ve found some great friends....thanks evryone for making my world beautiful...I guess you wont feel alone when you come to poemhunter..fulll of loving beautiful people....and well expressed indeeed...you have expressed your innermost feelings in a touching manner...express you emotions and share them with us with your poetic magic..regards
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