A Love Story

Poem By Eliseo Rivera

Planning to take his own life
In one hand he holds a knife
His life meant nothing to him
But little did he know suicide is a sin
While in a mirror he stares
He's thinking 'I don't care'
Because the one he used to belong
Is now gone
As the knife is sinking
He see's that he's bleeding
He feels the pain
But who's to blame?
As her life goes on
His death has now begun
Slipping away from his hand
As the knife is about to land
He said one thing to the lord
'Sorry' was the word
That was the last thing he said
Cause now he is dead
But before he killed himself
He left a note on the shelf
It read:
'Nothing to be said
Now that I lost you I feel like an empty vase
So I said 'if that's the case'
Death is the answer
Cause what I feel is like cancer
Cause like cancer you are consumed by pain
And death is all you can gain
Suicide is quick and fast
But with cancer, the pain would last
You have your heart sealed
While mine was trying to heal
So in these words I'ma say
Goodbye and have a nice day'
They didn't end up together
He should've known better
So he left a note
And this is what he wrote
'Your love was required
But my life has now expired'
In the end
A story was beening told by his best friend
And so he began
'Planning to take his own life
In one hand he holds a knife......'

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.: Sentimientos: .

Yo nunca te podre ver asi
Pues te eh amado desde te conoci
Tu me isiste feliz el dia que dijiste que si
Tu eras toda para mi

Enceñame A Olividar

Por mi corazon pasan los sentimientos
Por mi cabeza pasan los pensamientos
Pero mi corazon no puede acceptar
Ni mi cabeza te puede olvidar