(11/07/1975 / Natonin, Mountain Province, Philippines)

A Love Went Wrong

The sun keep on shining high
With sweet and tender smiles
As melody of rhythm fill the sky
with scents of joy more than mile.

I never thought I could ever sigh
with needles of pains every while
As the wind whispers me to fly
the tears of sorrows in my eyes.

I love to fumble a lovely melody
rejoicing for having your serenity
but when you gifted me infidelity
I hung my guitar to rest eternally.

I may not be perfect as you see
But never did I love somebody
For I vowed to serve forever thee
until my life be gone someday.

But with the Grace of God for me
Let the wheel of fate take me faithfully
To where I may rest and find glory
of a true love untarnished till eternity.

by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

Comments (7)

my favorite line here is, I hung my guitar to rest eternally-it is very meaningful, it says many things, and i see the picture you want to paint on this poem. you are good at words, you express well. Mabuhay ang Manunulang Pinoy sa Poemhunter.
love lost is heart lost...beautiful write in good rhythm and rhyme expressing the pain of love that lost...good work, Melvin...10
A sorrowful tale of love. Touching. 10 for you.
I sorta like that one ^_^ it is...sweet in an odd way...kind of.
What a touching piece that sways every lover's soul.
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