A Loving Partner

We found each other under the evening sky
the moon sat directly over our heads and sent
tidal waves that made our hearts bulge with love.

by Almedia Knight Oliver Click to read full poem

Comments about A Loving Partner

Roseann Shawiak 12 Jan 2016 08:31
A wonderfully written poem, of new found love, when coming later in life always leaves a question lingering in the mind - wondering if it's real or is it a dream in reality. Totally love this poem, give it a 10 and adding it to my favorite poems. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Marieta Maglas 01 Jun 2012 12:56
This impeccable poem of love, so eloquently written, convinces the reader that love is an eternal feeling coming from God.Blessings.Mari.
Saadat Tahir 01 Jun 2012 09:21
and i have no choice but to follow my respected colleague....with a resounding yes....! ! ! ranab k Chakraborty(5/29/2010 7: 36: 00 AM) 1st blow..........We found each other in the / orange evening horizon 2nd blow..........Yet our love is in bloom and its / Beauty kept by summer's warmth 3rd blow...........Your love strikes me like a serpent's; / And send love-venom throughout 4th blow............Now, take my life... death is mine. 5th blow............Dear, bear with me in weakness / That I can stand up to my age. Heaven is where, don't know, but where heart is so................heaven can't be too far. LIVE AND LIVE BEYOND.............. Regards, pranab k chakraborty 10+++
Saadat Tahir 01 Jun 2012 09:19
You chose this hanging fruit blemishs and all my time. Here! take this ripen berry that's barely attached to the vine. amazing poem, great imagery, a master craftsman weaving wicker baskets from strings of words. to hold Venus's drippings loved reading it...its a tenner no doubt. sat :)
Ahmed Abomahfouz 31 May 2012 06:25
Oh my God..what a poem! very beautiful. you aroused the readers desire for a loving partner in magic way
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 Feb 2011 05:34
Fantastic poem! Great imagery with almost perfect style. I am spell bound. What can I say except this that the poem has ruined my comfort. Excellent stuff.
Omar Ibrahim 07 Jun 2010 07:17
oh miss Almedia that's beautiful! ! why haven't i knew about you? they must make a guide to guide us to great poets! thanks for sharing
Pranab K Chakraborty 29 May 2010 07:36
1st blow..........We found each other in the / orange evening horizon 2nd blow..........Yet our love is in bloom and its / Beauty kept by summer's warmth 3rd blow...........Your love strikes me like a serpent's; / And send love-venom throughout 4th blow............Now, take my life... death is mine. 5th blow............Dear, bear with me in weakness / That I can stand up to my age. Heaven is where, don't know, but where heart is so................heaven can't be too far. LIVE AND LIVE BEYOND.............. Regards, pranab k chakraborty 10+++
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 12 Apr 2010 06:43
Very lovingly expressed love and intimacy.
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 Jan 2010 06:28
We found each other in the orange evening horizon Hearts tugged by moon and Swept up in the wave of time. If ever a woman is happy in her man... I'm she who delights in calming his needs! .. ya it gives unique joy and feeling and one is prepared to give every thing at his/her command.....10 read mine love at first sight....i miss
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 Jan 2010 12:32
'...Your love strikes me like a serpent's; And send love-venom throughout...' LoveDeath...by serpent's venom...wow! Snake has some thing to do with Sensuousness... indeed ... beautiful...metaphor.. 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
Trimmed with a tender touch that is trememdous.
Nimal Dunuhinga 23 Nov 2009 07:53
Hold him firmly as the love is very delicate Almeida...........Wonderful poem about the attachment! Many thanks indeed of your lovely comment on my poem.
Vanita Thakkar 09 Nov 2009 02:34
Very natural, very delicate sentiments - one always nurtures within, but hesitates in expressing - out of shyness or out of fear.... Well said. Vanita.
Ken E Hall 14 Oct 2009 06:22
A loving poem indeed which the reader can feel and the last verse explains it all which is lovely to read and tells you it is written from the heart uavaluvliday regards
Kesav Easwaran 19 Sep 2009 09:23
beautiful sentiments...romance has no age, Almedia...your concluding stanza lines are really touching...10
Marieta Maglas 12 Sep 2009 12:23
wonderful lyrical, symbolistic poem, lovely to read..........10+++++
Beker john 01 Sep 2009 05:21
great poem the words are so strong and so romantic i rated 10
Shashendra Amalshan 20 Aug 2009 01:31
Specially, the last part is great! ! ! ! ! great end
Shashendra Amalshan 20 Aug 2009 01:29
Hey you can write great screen plays.. This is like watching a drama, ... I mean like a scene from a drama.. this is wonderful.. written so passion and love.. great.. Very enjoyable read..felt your liness... with lots of lovess Shan