A Message

Poem By Dr. Nikhat Bano

The rays have brought your message
Piercing through my closed window
I can read a golden hued line
'I'll be yours, all my life'

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Comments about A Message

Wonderfully crafted poem with utmost economy of words.
Simple and catchy indeed....thanks for sharing
Simply superb, imagery and style of expression. Congrats on poem of the Day.
Reading a golden hued line is amazing through vision of mind uniting with light of wisdom that comes up to us. Piercing through window this Divine light rays come as grace of God. We feel these rays with due love. Love for God is eternal and love of God is eternal. An excellent poem is very well penned.10.....Congratulations!
Undefeatable, undeniable and unchallenged power of love. It can penetrate any enclosure. Wonderfully crafted poem. Congrats for gaining the well deserved acknowledgement. Thanks for sharing. X


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