DB (20.02.1988 / Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK)

Clean Break

We step away slowly,
When its all over,
And once again we are lonely.
This is what i am when you pull away the cover,
Scared and twisted and ugly.

There is a method to your lies,
But they hurt less than your honesty,
Am no longer in disguise,
Break through me,
Or stay and love me.

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Comments (6)

for me, i see a cause-and-result message which everyone has to learn...... good work Mr. Brown
Hi Dan, It's so beautiful. I feel that I can almost taste the pain. It's so deep and moving, a wonderful piece of poetry. Well done. Mary
i luv this poem its like i can feel the pian in this poem its really good
how come your poems seem to be written about my feelings? ? i've never read a poem that sums them up so well. its so beautiful.xxx
Hi dan, i like this one.. brings back certain memories......x
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