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A Mind Explosion! ! !
GW (June 11 1962/ / London Ontario Canada)

A Mind Explosion! ! !

Me Mistress has made the call
an' I must answer her need
a game of silly entrapment
as slowly I caress every key
She a wonder of merriment
knowing each button to push
has set thy hands a whirling
thy mindset true explosion

I do feel my mistress has missed
the soft way I touch her so deep
the truth behind my invoked mind
she listens to my soul weep
though comment and vote may count
none compare to my mistress' allure
'or long into night she fills delight
echoed on pages for evermore

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Comments (8)

nice work, fine flow of words
Are you trying to say, that your mistress nag is more important that what your readers (fans) has to say... in admiring your art? heh. Fine then. What a lucky mistress: D
Another great write. Nicely done. You said so much but in a tasteful manner. Keep writing!
Beautiful write Geoff! A romance poem that says so much...but tastefully! ((smile)) Great job once again on another wonderful piece of poetry....Great title and imagery. U R so good at this....keep it up ='} =Shelley=
Mistresses are extremely powerful... as i need not tell you geoff... x
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