( / Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

A Mind Of Splendour

Happiness appears in your face,
Going for a test drive in own bike,
Magnificent features are marked,
Splendid moment opens the route.

Testing this drive basing on wisdom,
You have gained strength and values,
By virtue you have gained wealth,
Go on driving for service of mankind.

Stars are smiling in front of you,
Elegance of yours opens new path,
Breeze of feeling is full of fragrance,
Riding this bike you travel so far.

Father's grace is falling on you,
In abundance you catch his mercy,
Being a beloved and faithful son,
Spread his message across the globe.

Mind of splendour is motivating life,
Beauty of hope is gathered in emotion,
Your deep thought and trick dazzle,
Affectionate younger dear you proceed.

Having peace, bliss and courage in mind,
Providing selfless service to this society,
Start your journey in wisdom and spirituality,
He is God, who saves you from all danger.

A mind of splendour sings his glory eternally,
You are eternal soul who drives this body,
You have bloomed in his garden of creation,
Oh dear soul, dear son, you glorify father.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,21 February 2018. All rights reserved.

by Kumarmani Mahakul

Comments (7)

A metaphorical poem that gives immense pleasure while reading...best wishes and prayers for peace and prosperity to you and your family Kumar...100 Thanks for all your comments on my poems too...God bless you
A beautiful metaphor, perhaps it's son of Mahakul Ji who is riding the new bike, how nicely the poet advises him to ride the bike with the intention of serving the humanity. A great poem.
You carry this extended metaphor deeper and deeper into the realm of spiritual being. A moving and energizing piece, and a welcome reminder that this life is just a test drive. Creative and insightful writing, good sir.
Happiness appears in your face, Going for a test drive in own bike, Magnificent features are marked, Splendid moment opens the route. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A mind of splendour sings his glory eternally, You are eternal soul who drives this body, - - - - - -The metaphor of a 'Splendour Bike ' for our material body is really amazing. We all are children of eternal father, are here to glorify Him.
really a splenid poem......and like Dr. Dillip K Swain, i also have t say that the last two stanzas are really effective and...metaphors you have presented great.....your son, so far as i know Pintu also is a poet here....really a happy father you are... bless you..........I like your all poems sir. in this regard I request you to read my poem...A Wordsmith and a Rider......which is also written on learning to ride a bike.
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