RL ( / Okinawa)

A Moment

Lost in the sight of a memory
Forever in the mind
All the significant signs
And they remind you
In that hope of a moment
That what's awakened remains
The blended blurs of quiet days
Standing solid
Standing true
No bitter blues
You discover
You realize
You're mesmerized

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Wow! i really like this. Because i am new to poetry myself i couldn't give you writing tips or ryming definement but i can understand what the meaning of it is. I think the structure of the poem and enjambment is great. I really like it!