A New Dream
A single lone bird
you cry for ever
carrying a green meadow
in this dreamy world
by Thampi KEE
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16 Dec 2013 07:56
14 Nov 2012 12:09
nice poem.Third stanza is interesting. Best wishes.
06 Apr 2012 09:44
beautiful poem, good use of short lines.
18 Mar 2012 07:57
Thampi, A cry for a new love dream. Good poem using metaphor..
14 Mar 2012 12:24
Very nice & beautiful poem I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! !
Ekaterina M. Polischuk
10 Mar 2012 01:17
very beautiful poem! i really like it :)
28 Dec 2011 11:39
Beautiful poem! I enjoyed it very much. Thank you!
10 Oct 2011 02:09
... I give you mine you give me fine life is not sad sad way you said True, life is not sad. But life is what we make of it. Keep sharing Thampi. Thank you.
Anil Kumar Panda
24 Jun 2011 01:03
very nice.the way you have communicated with birds is touching.loved it.
21 Jun 2011 07:46
A single lone bird you cry for ever... why is singleness always related to crying? I agree that there's nothing nice in isolation and it doesn't always end in tears.
Geetima Baruah Sarma
07 Apr 2011 05:30
Excellent, expressions beautifully crafted.
Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~
15 Jun 2010 08:58
Enjoyable read that touches the heart! Well penned.; D
23 Apr 2010 07:54
wonderful poem.i give you Ten for this one.
05 Apr 2010 08:03
A WELL WRITTEN POEM! Alas in Delhi I find only money culture, and further up north, only agriculture! My place of birth, the good old Calcutta, was once the seat of great tradition of culture! Now Bengal politics is eating it away, I have nothing more to say! Thanks for your comments! - Raj
Clara Odelia Ciutara
03 Feb 2010 06:48
I really love this poem... I give u mine n u give me....so nice
30 Oct 2009 03:35
A superb poem with a great flow and very innovative also, very sweet expressions, thanks for sharing! 10/10
11 Jun 2009 05:30
beautifull.what an intense feelings. wonderfull write. see this para fo its intense emotion. 'I give you mine you give me your five handful, and break the heartful' voted 10 love surya
29 May 2009 02:16
Very lovely and much touchy 10
Sandhya S N
20 May 2009 04:24
Really touching expression of love regards sandhya
03 Dec 2008 10:00
Love is beautiful, something too beautiful to be carried with our only both hands. but we can carry it, with an additional two hands of our lovers. Nice piece..