A Pair Of Eyes

Poem By Neela Nath Das

A pair of eyes constitutes the mass of art,
A pair of eyes, tells the throb of heart.
A pair of eyes, is a cool forest pond.
A pair of eyes, is sorcerer's wand.
A pair of eyes, mirrors the soul and mind.
A pair of eyes, thru which man we find.
A pair of eyes, sees all our deeds,
God's eyes are those, one's conscience needs.

Comments about A Pair Of Eyes

A pair of eyes is a powerful statement. A pair of eyes is the windows to the soul. The eyes tells a lot about the person. When they are sad, happy, love, hate, compassion. Only God though sees all. Very inspiring.
a hitting write, Hari, the idea is beautiful, deep and mystic...after many days i read something from your wonderful writing...thanks for this piece, it's lovely...if i were the composer, i would try to avoid the repetition of A pair of eyes from line 2 to 6...but the emphasis is strong in yours, indeed!
nice write Hari the eyes of GOD sees all
Most important blessing of God are ones eyes and the right sight!
A delightful write Hari, the eyes tell a lot about a person, more than words.


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