TM ( / England)

A Perfect Proposal

It still overwhelms me
As I remember that day
He called to meet for coffee
Something he wanted to say

He stood like a gentleman
And sweetly took my hand
Simply stating without any falter
I would like to marry your daughter

She is all I ever wanted
She is the perfect girl
Seven years of such bliss
It's time to make a promise

I want her to share my life
I want her to be my wife
I will take care of her
I absolutely adore her

It really was a Good Friday
And still she had no clue
As they walked the gardens
And of what he was about to do

She came across the table
Set for two under the tree
And that was the moment
He got down upon one knee

Words cannot describe
The grateful heart in me
I pray their love remains
And grows for all eternity

10.04.2009 - My baby girl got engaged :)
(Dedicated to my son to be... finally - I will have a son!)

User Rating: 5,0 / 5 ( 4 votes ) 7

Comments (7)

first congratulation. it's picuture words. thanks for
hi tia its so so sweet...sugar pie yum yum very nice lines but no...not a mum... a mum in law... they write whole books about u nw ; -) ...all the best for ur baby doll c heers
Oh Tia - - what a beautiful reason to write such a tender poem - - and congrats to you all - - may they have many happy years together and thanks for sharing your delight too....10 + + from Fay.... xx
This is a lovely and beautifully written poem, Tia, and it seems you are getting a very charming man for a son-in-law! Your daughter is indeed very lucky to have found such a gentleman and caring man for a husband. And at last you have a son to dote on! Thank you for this quite charming write. Carl.
So Happy for her and you Tia, my congratulations to the happy couple... Andy x
See More