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A Petalfly
EL ( / Macau)

A Petalfly

Poem By Elisa Lai

drifting down the noon beams
a golden petal
on reaching the cement
it came to life
and flew
away from me

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lovely, very japanese tanka
A lovely poem Elisa, I've never seen one but you describe it beautifully, and in such a delicate way. Super! Love Ernestine XXX


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