A Place In You

How can I have a place within you?
I honestly care about your tender ways
Thinking your protection every moment
Loving every details of your life

Understand whatever your past
Forgetting what lies around and behind you
I don’t mind what others ‘r saying
Just give me a little room upon you

Waiting cannot last any longer
Because I will die early longing with you
Shortness of life is everlasting to me
If I had space in the kingdom of your heart

Where will I stay in the rest of my days?
To whom will I give my everlasting commitment?
If your heart is open only for a dot-sized
Will let me pass through a Place within
and open widely to flow like a stream of Love inside you?

by Captain Herbert Poetry

Comments (33)

Wonderful gentle, caring words for a woman to hear from someone who loves her as she is. An unconditional love that surpasses all, wanting only the best for her and placing it in a poem to touch her heart. Beautiful sentiments, Herbert! ! 10! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Love! With a place within. Nice work.
I honestly care about your tender ways Thinking your protection every moment.. nice lnes...10 it is good search to reach and gains tability with blessings from an almighty
Written with such passion and beauty it is a great poem on love.
Beautful spoken! ! A gift of Love to be truly cherished! ! !
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