A Place In You

How can I have a place within you?
I honestly care about your tender ways
Thinking your protection every moment
Loving every details of your life

by Captain Herbert Poetry Click to read full poem

Comments (33)

Wonderful gentle, caring words for a woman to hear from someone who loves her as she is. An unconditional love that surpasses all, wanting only the best for her and placing it in a poem to touch her heart. Beautiful sentiments, Herbert! ! 10! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Love! With a place within. Nice work.
I honestly care about your tender ways Thinking your protection every moment.. nice lnes...10 it is good search to reach and gains tability with blessings from an almighty
Written with such passion and beauty it is a great poem on love.
Beautful spoken! ! A gift of Love to be truly cherished! ! !
Beautifully written expressing great passion and truth pouring from your besotted heart!
Very well written. I love: -)
nice one... treasure every moment.. for we are just a passers by..
beautifully expressed.....
Wonderful creation and masterpiece. Burning and passionate love
Two thumbs up on this poem. Great
Understand whatever your past Forgetting what lies around and behind you I don’t mind what others ‘r saying Just give me a little room upon you Each line is so Lovely powerful and very nice and beautiful. Hands up. Thumbs UP. Well Done
...it will start in small size then the love will overflow. BRILLIANT poet
How elusive to pass inside your heart to get the love of the dearest one APPLAUSE on this poem Thumbs up to the poet
I feel an honest commitment and faithful love to the beloved. So beautiful and lovely
BRILLIANT! ! ! I love the climax at the last stanza
Brilliant poem! The eleventh verse invaded my mind...
Like the topic of love. There's always a place for love in one's heart. If not then make room!
very nice well said and very loving, keep up the good poems.
Very sweet, i enjoyed keep writing