A Prayer

Help me hold on Lord,
Down on my knees,
Each day I sink lower,
Help me up, please,

by Vallerie Lobell Click to read full poem

Comments about A Prayer

Marvin Brato 18 May 2012 06:52
faith in God is what we need most especially in our daily struggle in life! Well-penned!
Amen, beautiful, thanks for sharing 10
Kesav Easwaran 05 Jun 2009 07:46
grievances made known to God...well written poem Vallerie... though the theme inside is grief...10
Egi David Perdana 09 Oct 2008 08:54
the ways to make people better is a praying
Ron Flowers 19 Aug 2008 08:20
Very sad, very touching, very well written. Ron
Colin Jeffery 02 Aug 2008 03:00
A very moving poem. Brilliant
, aryaindia 27 Jul 2008 02:39
I can feel the sincerity of your sordid words, overflow in the desire they hold. blessings, arya
Sandra Fowler 21 Mar 2008 04:23
I am touched by your heartfelt prayer. I am sure that your words reached Heaven, for prayers have wings you know. Take care, my poet friend. Warmest regards, Sandra
Rani Turton 21 Mar 2008 08:13
Surely such a beautifully expressed prayer cannot go unanswered. Thank you for the poem.