A Rambling Vibe!

Unburden thy heart oh fair Lady
We shall enlighten things gone shady
Let us talk and walk a mile
I like your snicker when you smile

by Geoff Warden Click to read full poem

Comments (8)

How you manufacture and make a fresh use of used words and ideas! This is brilliant. Something so classic yet so new, it stands out and prevent my personal 'objective criticism' from crippling the poem a bit. I admit. You managed to sustain the glutinous relationship of classic and modern poetry in your poem. I'll keep reading. Thanks- Daffodil
Nice write. The title of this one match with the story being told.
I catch the drift of this one, But I think it sticks in places, Not up to your usual standard.
Rambling it is not. Touching and well penned it is. I'm looking forward to seeing more. t x
Geoff, Duncan was right top marks, I can see that you were having dinner with the Bard. I just loved the Shakespear approach in this poem because I am a great fan of the Bard and this poem is perfect of his work, great write Cheers Sylvie
Top marks for this one Geoff, a first class poem displayed Love duncan X
GOOD SIR GEOFF...HEAVY DUTY ROMANTICISING HERE! GOOD STUFF... ''''''''''''''''FJR
GOOD SIR GEOFF...HEAVY DUTY ROMANTICISING HERE! GOOD STUFF... ''''''''''''''''FJR