A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.2 (C) 3-19-09

Don't really know what to say but speak from my mind
Well I'm fine and I guess you can call me one of a kind
Been tricked by a Slick Rick...I'm feeling sick
But I pick the tick to travel out and stab him in the palm like a prick
I'm stick thick and I'm quick and I'm clever
Whatever the weather never decides whether I get better forever
Lured by Old Nicks, card trick, apparent nonstick, magic trick, however
I've been played by the beauteous girls in my school
Played stupid riddles and hand games and this is the rule
First...open the gate tell who it is you hate
but that's your date now escape gotta get to a safe place
Find a fish and borrow the cod's cape
Travel to cape cod which is odd and a little misplaced
Find a landin' spot that's great no longer chafe
but turn around...you been bein' chased by an ape
To be continued...
*Creator - Me, Maxiro Xeniyah*
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Copyright (c) 3-19-09 Corey Threet

by Corey Threet

Comments (9)

Proper rhyme, Beautiful words properly placed. u have good writing skill.
it's brilliant because of the even rhyming and the fact that it doesn't feel like it's pushed.10+
What I like about your writing is the hip hop feel. I'm sure you do it on purpose. I can't for the life of me figure out what these poems mean but I'll read on.
when one goes into your mind, it seems like the person is hard to find for ' you are one of a kind. you put whats in your mind into rhyme and verse, you will get better but you won't get worse. ha-ha have a gr8t day little brother. p.s. i read a few of them before i decided to answer, they're good.
wow. i never seen anybody do a poem like that. that was crazy so many rhyming words that flowed so nicely into one poem.
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