A Rare Truth

Bloom could the cherries no more,
The haste that burdened,
Made visionary the sight,
Restrictions frequent but pure,

by Uzma Jamil Click to read full poem

Comments (7)

your poem is really meaningful and creative, and I like it. can you please read and rate my poem " I seek a friend" . thank you
a lovely poem. nice imagery. the sky shone making the air sweet. and the lips smiled with the curves of joy.
a lovely written poem..the idea is quite rich.. meaningful and heart touching poem..specially these two lines are very very meaningful And the lips smiled with the curves of joy, All was seen a rare truth of dependent history.
hi there...very nice lines Bloom could the cherries no more, The haste that burdened, Made visionary the sight, Restrictions frequent but pure, Had not known, i too write in this double inverted style....at times i am castigated for it....but what to do...you write as u like to... i liked your lines a lot cheers
Nice poem.... when you were wet in thoughts! ! ! and you wanna share those very potenially! ! great urge to say what u thinking..........10 Ali
its a very powerful write with strong metaphor, wonderful imaginery..with words bit hard to swallow :) ...keep up with the good writting and thanks for sharing...10 rgds asif
Very good poem Uzma.........do keep posting.......... Thanx 4 sharing...... words mein wazan zyada hai........jo ki ek achche poet ki nishani hai......very gud........keep it up......