PFE ( / Cincinnati, Ohio, USA)

A Real Fantasy

A lovely lady danced upon a stage
Her limber body moved with grace and rage
Beware! Each warming movement seems uncouth
As she unveils that flower of shapely youth
A flirting smile enhanced her sensuous eyes
Which brought the burlesque show alive
To guys she beckoned with festive gaiety
A dream so valued by laity
The teasing dancer's subtle scheme has won
And after that the passion plot is done

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Comments (1)

Outside of anger the dancing seductress has no internal life, and she uses her body as a snare of enticement to get what she wants from equally shallow men. I like the rhyming at the end of each line. The poem is nicely crafted. Well done.