CA ( / Poetry Hell, Vermont)

A Relationship, Of Sorts

Love flew in my window
I thought 'whatever for? ! '
in the past it just brought woe
so I showed it to the door

Then in through my window
crawled a thing called Fear
saying 'if you won't chance Love
then I will live right here'

User Rating: 4,7 / 5 ( 11 votes ) 25

Comments (25)

Love, a never ending subject, fascinating but painful. Ruthie
Hi Chuck Another 10 for a first class rhyming miniature. Great balance and rythmn in here. All have a moral or point, no matter how short Great Steve
I love this Chuck, it is so clever in its brevity. HG: -) xx
Though brief, this is a witty and clever poem, Chuck. I particularly liked how you made each terse word count, yet made them produce just the right bit of imagery to make this poem very effective. Carl.
This has the brilliance of a Leunig cartoon. What more can I say? love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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