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~~~a Rose Bloomed In My Hands~~
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~~~a Rose Bloomed In My Hands~~

Poem By Kolitha Lelwala

She was screaming…
Rushed into my hands…
Help me………
My baby’s on the way..
I received wings from Mother Nature
Flew to a room in ER with her
Take a deep breath dear….
Don’t grab my hand darling…
I need my hands free
I am helping you…..
I am with you..
My soul is always for people like you
Oh yeah.. Slowly push
Lovely…
Petals unveiled
Clamped the chord…
Suspended her from the feet
Patted gently
Cutie birdie started chirping
Darling you’ve got a little daughter
She is very healthy.
A Rose bloomed in my hands

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Comments (9)

h yeah.. Slowly push Lovely… Petals unveiled Clamped the chord… Suspended her from the feet beautiful description of a wonderful birth and your helping hands. and finally the comment A rose bloomed.. sooo nice.
I really like your poem. You have portrayed a joyous moment in a very delicate way. Its simply a great work. Best wishes.
Well expressed.I love this poem.You've portrayed a nice image.I love dthese lines. Cutie birdie started chirping Darling you’ve got a little daughter She is very healthy. A Rose bloomed in my hands' Beautiful flow write.10 for content.
'|Cutie birdie started chirping Darling you’ve got a little daughter She is very healthy. A Rose bloomed in my hands' lovely words sir..liked it very much..nice poetic expressions too...enjoyed it very much thanks best wishes shan
Praiseworthy! When I see this lovely poem I think of Dr.Che Guvera...... of his untimely death?


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