MS (8.4.1929 / Marton, Lancashire)

A Rose Is Only Until

hold the camera
as the rose's petals
fall
one by
one
until.

backwards
film
the
run
Now

a minor miracle
of memory
in two dimensions
once three.

you.
I.

who
holds
the camera
now?

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Comments (2)

What a great idea in construct, Michael. And as I look backward at those who were in my camera's eye, I really understand this one. Raynette
You always make me think, Michael. Great free verse construction on this one.