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A Seaside Picture
(06.08 1983 r. / Gdynia)

A Seaside Picture

a sunny weather
seagulls are flying so low
to the sea waves near
there is wet sand under feet
boy is building the castle

turret only stayed
is finishing it quickly
he is happy now
suddenly a bad surprise
and everything tumbled down

the same as the house
weak, because built from the cards
the dog is running
it is leaving only tracks
but it are transitory

our destroyed dreams
are a painful memory
it will often leave
permanent tracks on the heart
it is hard to remove them

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Comments (9)

A amazing poem. The sea, a place to create memories.
A amazing poem. The sea, a adventure and so beautiful.
A common seaside picture is made to a good poetry.
really nice poem can you tell what castle made is that you sorrow
Slow down; edit critically; correct all grammatical gaffes. drb
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