LB (31 may 1991 / empangeni, south africa)

A Serious Kiss

A seriouskiss feels
like you're floating in the ocean,
Yet like you're sinking slowly.
It makes you feel
complete, feel safe.
a serious kiss feels like
coming home.

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Comments (4)

a serious kiss is a bliss the bodies being a mean of two hearts clean.....
Londiwe, Now, get serious! Cheers. Subroto
Though a brief poem, Londiwe, this fine poem is wonderfully expressed and does capture a reader's imagination with your excellent imagery in it. You clearly have a good talent for expression, and it poetry, that is one of the most important things, to catch and hold the reader's attention with a few short words, which you did very well in this charming poem. Carl.
this poem is soul touching! ! short but has the kill.well done, Londiwe