08. Hold On To Your Dream

hold on to your dream
it sweetens all your nights
brightens up your days
because dream is a compass
that shows only one aspired direction -
success, success and more success

by john tiong chunghoo

Comments (18)

Your poetry has touched a soul on the other side of the globe.
Niece piece, being a lover of poetry I too feel the urge within to express varied sentiments thru poetic verses. Write more my friend. take my 9
This left me kind of breathless and speechless. A fine verse starkly yet serenely conveying that image of solitude so many (and perhaps especially poets?) know so well. t x
An enjoyable piece; loved the phrase 'translucent verse'. Nice job!
Loved the images in this poem. Good one. Sincerely, Connie Webb
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