TM ( / England)

A Sweet Surprise

It feels just like Christmas time
Waiting for this surprise of mine
What is it, whatever could it be
I am wondering, so excitedly

I almost wish I did not know
Time seems to go so slow
Hearing another car drive by
Could that be the delivery guy

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Comments (7)

a sweet little rhyme that captures not only the moment of the writer, but, the heart of the reader.10's all the way
Your poems are elegant, breezy and beautiful my friend. They never fail to make me smile with the wit or refreshing candor. Thank you for sharing of your talent. :)
Nice piece Tia, loved the last stanza..and it feeling of anticipation.
hey hey Tia - tell us please, what is the surprise, and do not tease....... Fay.
How exciting Tia, someone must love you, please let us know what it is..... I'm nosey lol, Lynda xx
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