Feelings...

As I wake by your side,
My feelings for you I cannot hide,
I touch your face in the morning light,
Being with you just feels so right

You make me feel like I'm a your’s,
Like being inside an awesome dream,
Although this is real, that I know,
As the love that surrounds us continues to grow

I think of what the future holds...
Marriage, children, us growing old,
And as I lay, with you dear,
I'm just so glad you're mine, you're here...

I WILL ALWAYS BE WITH YOU FOREVER...


Dedicated for My Love...

Please don't copy... thank u...

by Surendar Chowdary Vattikuti

Comments (6)

I shudder to think of the circumstances the poor mariner went through. This is a tale of dread and anguish to keep one spell bound. Rhymes are the one that add charm to it.
To start a tale is easy but difficult to finish, ............. just this poem, ..... well done
This is how to tell a story- -it held me spellbound from beginning to end. The ability to keep a rhythm was amazing given the story and end rhymes that never were forced or unnatural but kept the flow of the tale going. A masterpiece of writing. Course the topic was a mite bit unsettling...
Cannibalistic poems are not to my taste. Neither is meat of any type.
Such a great excellent write by William Topaz McGonagall👍👍👍
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