RMJ ( / Laoag City, Philippines)

A Taste Of Hell

His love came and left
Like a dust devil
Giving her nothing
But a taste of Hell.

Copyright 2018, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

User Rating: 5,0 / 5 ( 7 votes ) 21

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Like a dust devil.......fine. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.
The of the wind can bring the devil dust. Dust the wind carries the way he wants it.
That's what they all say (about me) . : ( : ( i'm misunderstood! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i like the poem. to MyPoemList. bri ;)
There is something chilling about the last line. There is something that makes it intense- as if it were almost spitting at you from behind the screen. Perhaps it is the brevity of it- perhaps it is the truth that it speaks? Thank you for sharing.10+.
Very intense short poem... very well crafted.10+ on this.
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