RMJ ( / Laoag City, Philippines)

A Trickle Of Thought -1

Innate talent is like a river
It will just flow freely
From the mind
Through the veins
To the heart and soul.


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I cite you here, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, innate talent is like a river It will just flow freely From the mind Through the veins To the heart and soul.....................I love this metaphored poem, full of Brilliance, mesmerizing poem, you conjured magic here, my dear. A true inspiring brevity..Each time, this poem has qan very inspiring appeal to me It has to do with the poetic and the artistic.......very impressing poetry, it has trickled my thoughts in a way. Thank YOU! .
I like your trickles of thought. Beautifully written and containing some very nice wisdom.
Such people are naturally gifted Rose...I do agree it's a pleasure to enjoy their contributions...of course this poem too is one from such a gifted poetess...thanks and God bless you
Innate talent is a gift of nature, if it finds a of opportunity it falls from mountains and ends in a sea like a river. Sometimes Rose Marie Juan Austin has this natural talent, that remained confined in a lake and when the lake was overfilled it found a to conquer he plains. She is a conquering poetess/ I wish her more success!
I like very much the use of the metaphors here. You excel in brilliance, Mrs. Juan-Austin and how. I have come back to reread this poem because of its perfect beauty. Perfection does only need that tad difference and this poem has that. Once again thank you so much for sharing,
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