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A True Love Confession

Good heaven's above
you ask could it be love
Darn right you are
and from so afar
Tis like manna from heaven
and I do confess
A limited edition
brings me this bliss
Cadbury's still can out do
with coconut & cashews too
A birthday treat from above
Chocolate is my one true love

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Comments (14)

True love! And i do confess. Nice work.
Tis like manna from heaven and I do confess Rachel Ann Butler
Ahh, you ladies and your chocolates, Tia! Haven't met one yet who didn't love chocolate more than just about anything else in the world! I liked your fine poem, just enough misdirection in it (what I like to call poetic sleight of hand) to trick the reader until it's charming end. That's another thing ladies like to do, tease men because we're so gullible! Anyway, it's an excellent brief poem, and was a delight to read. Carl.
hey you fooled me till the end! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! coz chocolate is thy true love confession- nice write regards anju
Good sense of humour. What flavour is your chocolate? I would also love to have your flavour, lol.
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