Lost Identity.


Lost identity.

My dream as a child.
Became a passion in my youth.
To search for my identity.
And search for the truth.
I differentiated myself from every other mortal.
I differentiated myself for a subtle known cause.
To be the best amongst all of them.
And to prevent them not to know of my identity loss

The good that I achieved
Doesn’t seem to be no more
Or probably it wasn’t good enough
For my conscience to be sure
I was probably the most competitive
In an effort to establish my superiority
I’m still to reach that ultimate position
To re-establish my lost identity.
written by salma torrez. copyright

by salma. torrez

Comments (15)

In order to identify a white dot black ground is necessary. A beautiful philosophical poem nicely executed. 10
Just as light is accentuated by darkness, certain good people will be noticed in the presence of people who are foul in nature! A profound thought! A sure 10
Very true. What a brilliant thought! Likewise, bright stars are visible only in the deep darkness of the night. +++10.
A simple deep message that sticks in the memory of the reader. Excellent!
This is brilliant! Really brilliant(why didn't I think of something like this first? WHYYYY?)
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