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A Window Of Time
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A Window Of Time

Poem By Dave Alan Walker

Looking through a window
where time had stopped
I see my mother calling

Calling for me
to see where I had been
I see myself run to her
I feel a sense of shock

I shout for them
to look at the window

I see their disbelief
as they look right at me
Then they disappear
right in front of me

Right up until her death
My mother would always talk
of a ghost at the window
that looked just like me

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A bit scary at the last line on the last stanza? Good one
Oh my dear how fantastic is that this piece of work? this window is a metaphor and symbol, make this poem superb, this indirect way of writing make your poem very poetic and strong, congratulation 10/10
wonderfully written, and memorable. And the title is perfect. I think a lot of folks can see themselves in your words here. A fine penning.
A Window of Time, what a beautiful poem on mother no more and her memories. I feel glad I read it. I rate it high.
What a great memory of your late mother!I see the bond of intimacy & love between your mother &you.A great poem!


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