RMJ ( / Laoag City, Philippines)

A World Full Of Wonders

I know the joy
That comes from watching
The sunrise
It sends hope
For a new day.

The inner peace we feel
When we walk through a meadow
Of wildflowers
It is like the world
Is paradise.

The beauty of the rainbow
That arches across the sky
After a big storm
It renews the spirit
Of a deserted heart.

The brightness of the orange moon
That turns the night
Into a colorful landscape
It gives a warm embrace
For a peaceful night.

The kiss
Of a cool breeze
On the face and strands of hair
Like a wonderful promise
That everything will be alright.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

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Comments (19)

The kiss Of a cool breeze On the face and strands of hair Like a wonderful promise That everything will be alright./// beautiful poetic expression
An excellent poem, brilliant lines conceived and written. Every reader will enjoy the colourful language here enormously. It was a true celebration to read this amazing world of wonders, Mrs. Juan Austin. Thank you so much for sharing these dazzling gems, one by one each a very beautiful pearl, absolutely a world full of wonders- God Blessses You and your beloved family.
Stanza Five The kiss From a cool breeze On the face and hair strands As a wonderful promise That everything will be fine. All five stanzas read and reread, beautifully chosen and formulated words and metaphors. I greatly enjoyed all five verses and such excellent expressions, this gem goes directly to my list of poems.
Stanza Four: The brightness of the orange moon That changes the night In a colorful landscape It gives a warm embrace For a quiet night. The orange moon is usually larger than the moon we see every night, and orange, a bit reddish, the same as blood moon, I reckon, that's why we get the feeling of a warm glow, the colour orange is a warm colour, just like we get a warm embrace. Beautifully conceived. I can keep dreaming on like this.
Stanza Three: The beauty of the rainbow That bent through the air After a big storm It renews the mind From an abandoned heart. Such a beautiful sentence, we know the rainbow, in the fortnight that I was in Ghana I saw it twice. Really very beautiful! So too this stanza, it shows finesse in the creation. An abandoned heart? ! Fantastic metaphor.
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