Poem By Mohammad Akmal Nazir

The blow was very cruel,
The bud could not blossom,
It died underneath,
And who cares?
The loss was a tribute
To the overenthusiasm of sowing the seeds.

Comments about Abortion

Over excited you say.Would have been a good flower.
Very Philosophical poem. All is accidental and based on probable situations I guess!
This poem really packs a punch. It may be small, but it has so much to read into. I enjoy it.
This poem is very well written and to the point. After reading a second time I read even more into it. Very nice! May God be with and protect all the unborn babies!
simple and well written, , outstanding..i give you 10++ here Akmal.

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