Acid Rain

Poem By Deepak Amembal

From true rain
Drought floats, beyond
The fire cloud,
To patiently stay,
Than end, with
Tingling lights.

Comments about Acid Rain

imaginative write...thanks...10
Very touching poem.....so touching
Excellent imagery. Very well done. Chrissie
Great little image, and I loved the title. Really works. Thank you.


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