! ! ! ! ! ! Adaptation - Haiku! ! ! ! ! !

On an April noon,
Cows beat the heat in still ponds;
Man swoons in hot winds.

by Mamta Agarwal

Comments (9)

Excellent composition 10+++
Good feeling and observation... (I think the second line has 8 syllables as muddy = 2 syllables) . But I like the haiku! Cheers. Subroto
nice one....i like it.....
what an insight... inside a man and an animal... :)
I agree with palash...................cows and animals are more intellegent.............Good Write........
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