*admittance*

Poem By Alien Girl

I was thanked for my honesty today
A noble deed.
The truth unfolded
A validation of an honest woman
But yet I lie
and I lie
and I lie
Just like him
and you
and you.
So where does that leave me
Lying in a cesspool of honesty
Or just merely keeping my head above water
Escaping death only to drown
In your sea of mediocrity

Comments about *admittance*

loved the way u ended this one. i really liked the last 5 lines. but overall a great piece of writing. i cant wait to read more.


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