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Almost There2
DG (9/19/1963 / )

Almost There2

Frozen shadows,
blinking lights,
lovers laughing,
underneath the
star filled skys.
Hand in hand,
heart on heart,
a toest to us,
and a promise
of a new start.

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Comments (5)

Hi David, I prefer this poem over the other. This is really nice. I guess I am a little romantic. Excellent poem nice and fun to read. Take care
Hi David. Your poem is peaceful and calming to me. It has a nice rhythm and rhyme :)
I agree with Mary, a pleasant read. Well done.
Sounds like a beautiful evening you've described wonderfully with such simple words. Great work (as usual) David. Sincerely, Mary
i like this poem david it makes me think and i dont do that very often because i'm always laughing at myself orgy asm