( / Cebu City, Philippines)

Alone

So deep the silence
I am drowned beneath
So deafening it makes
The sound of tear dropp could be heard

No one to talk to
But the mirror of my own shadow
Thoughts spoiled with sadness
As blank stares get lost in the empty space

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Comments (7)

Fabulous poem it's so short it is so heart rendering. I love the line 'The sound of a tear dropp could be heard' I could almost visulize and hear it. Kept thinking about it after I read it.
Short and amazing...
i know xactly what you mean, we all experiance at some point in our lives.Simple yet pierces through the heart. nice read
Beautiful contrasts, fine art...
awww, yes I know the feeling of loneliness is unbearable, you really painted a real picture there, good job! Love the pen name by the way :)
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