Am I Real?

Translucent being
in the reflection
a clouded mind
obscure motivations
one stroke to the trachea
an empty echoing response
a world void of aknowledgement

by Anayssa Garcia

Comments (1)

Aloha Anayssa... I enjoyed the innuendo and the abstract nature of your death strike... John does have a good point... the use of windpipe downgrades the quality of your work... your choice of title pulls me into what I believe to the subject of the post... a concise and individually experienced void of acknowledgement... very well presented... should this be so... I deeply appreciate your honesty... and feel the pain through your words... all of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.