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Promise
DM (08/11/1984 / DAR ES SALAAM)

Promise

I will be easy company; the blur
Of what I longed for once will fade to space.
No thought that could discomfort you will stir.
My eyes will painlessly survey your face.

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where my colouf tears accelerated.....just my eyes were cheated the sound of the verses gives the silence of the voice where we find the beat echos thanks
Just my eyes were cheated. (I like this line)
good inmagery in this poem. nicely done
i, ve found that wonderful beat, colourful tears ? ? ? ? behiind the mountain. no pain no joy. no laughter.... Verx y creative expressions and colourful imagination. thank you, just my eyes were cheated.
‘just behind the mountain, where my colorful tears accelerated, ’ ~ fine imagery in flavor of somber and highs of mountains… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Tears will make thousand rills... n
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